Terrence

WALT USE OUR SENSES WHEN WRITING A PIECE OF DESCRIPTIVE WRITING AND MAKE THE READER SHARE THE SENSATION WE DESCRIBE.

There once were a black and grey ship it traveled around the .Earth once a year then it came to this place .Were time had forgot about there was only one thing lived there but the smell was horrible like dead rats an sewage at the top of the ship it had all kinds of things up there like dead body and old yummy food like meat and rats. thats when ship had broken apart but then it was the ship that time knows now

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