Waikato

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Descriptive Writing
WALT:use our sences when writing a piece of descriptive writing and make the reader share the sensations we described.

As I opened the main door,I started getting goosebumps around my whole body.I walked into the old scary building and I heard something from the kitchen so I went to have a look and there was a pot full of dead rats and live cockroaches so I screamed because it was so disgusting and it made me want to vomit everywhere.And then bang went the door and it closed.Then I ran to the door and tried to open it but it stayed shut,so now I was scared stiff and there was this rotten,disgusting and blood smell coming from up stairs.So I found a small rusty,grey peg on the floor and clipped it to my nose so I wouldn't be dead in ten seconds by that awful smell.I was completely lost in this house and it was very horrifying because every light step I took made a squeaky sound from the floorboard.I then went up the mouldy stairs.The carpet on the stairs were soggy,wet and had dry blood splat on the bars and I did not want to touch them.When I got to the hallway,I saw that there were 23 rooms in a row."their must of been alot of people that lived in here".I said.And then I heard this old voice coming from the twenty first room and I had always told my friends that my badluck number was twenty one.I didn't want to take another step closer to the twenty first room.I didn't even remember what got me here.I opened the door to the twenty first room,slowly and steadily.When I opened it,it swung open very fast and hit the wall.At this time I was scared to death and I saw some pictures of people hanging on the wall.Then I could feel a breeze ears as if somebody was whispering into my ear.I turned around and I saw a,a,a, ghost.I started screaming my head off,it came up to me and covered my head with a sack.I found it hard to breathe so I suffocated and blacked out.When I woke up I was in my room and I ran out of my room and saw my family at the eating table having breakfast.I was puffing so hard that my throat was dry."you look like youve seen a ghost"mum said,then I realised that I just had a nightmare,a very scary nightmare.