Vanessa

My descriptive writing WALT: use our senses when writing a piece of descriptive writing and make the reader share the sensations we describe

When I walk in I first feel think going through me i look around feel terrified i see things go pass me i feel like screaming. It looks like a damp of rubbish it looks like the stairs are old and not useful. Mmm i can taste rotten maggots i fault like so terrified. When i went into the bedroom i can hear some think creepy. Then i went into the bathroom and there were holes in the floor and the roof was hang there were smash windows and a broken bath. I can hear ghost going pass me and i was scared, THE END