Shanice

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One night on Halloween I went trickle treating with my friend called Ally and just down the road we saw a house it looked like a haunted house. We went and knocked on the door and then we tried the door handle it was unlocked. Then we said said "hello is anyone there" it appears to be no one there. We walked in very slowly that a cat rushed passed our legs and with a gush of wind the door slammed shut.It was very dark that I felt spiderwebs on my hands from touching the walls. Then I remembered that I brought my torch. I put my backpack on the creepy wooden floor boards I felt for my torch. I put the torch on we looked around this creepy house of someones. Then I suddenly saw a print on the wall of a dead body mark I also saw a light up the stairs as we walked up the stairs one of the wood planks broke I fell over. Ally helped me up onto my feet as we went to the room that the light was coming from. I slowly opened up the door and "surprise" all my friends and family say " happy birthday".

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