Bailey

my descriptive writing Walt-Use our sentences when writing a piece of descriptive writing and make the reader share the sensation we describe.

BANG!,BASH!,BOOM!the sky went furious I can't sleep I've been shipwrecked. I've been stranded on a strange island I have no idea where I am. My sences are telling me the others are alive I just need to find them but where could they be, are they on the same island? I'll have to explore the entire island if I will survive. The people on the other islands thought where is the caption we will have to look for him they gathered all of the supplies they could find to make a boat

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