Tristan

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My descriptive writing about a haunted house

WALT: use our senses when writing a piece of descriptive writing and make the reader share the sensations we describe

This smelly stinky house rots away faster than you ca blink. its send shivers up my spine ans the only light in the house flickers on and off. the taste in my mouth is like eating a mouth full of 1 year old mould. As i walk around every step fells like walking on soft sponge. As i open the ugly front door i hear it squeak for a very long time it bangs into the door stopper and at the same time a very loud thunder clap went off. As i back away from the most disgusting house i have ever seen the front door suddenly slams shut. i run away in horror.